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MY FANTASTIC FISHING TRIP

On my fishing trip I went to the reef and stomped into the boat with our fishing rods and a lifejakets. While Im in the boat I look down at the water and the rocks were sinking in the sand.
Later on 3 sharks came along called Hamershark ,Tigershark and a great white shark it was
amazing. I also got a snapper , eel , squid,octopus and a sea horse . When we came back from
the ocean we went to the lake there were rockpools under the wharf and I saw some caves
too. The snapper was scaley and the squid was inky .

The Enchanted Prince.

Once a long time ago in the middle of the deep dark ocean was a boat and in the boat was a woman named Corin. One day she woke up from the waves pushing the boat back and forth . Corin thought ''I am hungry I will catch some ika for my kai. And she went to get her rod.

My Amazing Fishing Trip.

Last week me and my dad and mum and sister we went to thet beach.My dad and my mum caught a very big big snapper but when I climb up a rock, there were two sting-ray in the water. I got stung because I fell down in to the water and thats how I got stung and it was sore there was alot of sea weed in the water. There was also a star f ish at the bottom of the sea. The End.

My Great Fishing Trip.

One hot morning my uncle,antie and cousins took me to the beach to have a swim, I was the first one to hop in. When my cousin hopped in last and he got bitten from crab he said ouch cause it was sore. My uncle got the rod and setted it out oin the sea, he waited untill he felt a pull and he felt one he would have to pull back and got a enormous hideous fish,my cousin said it was brilliant, I said it was ugly and smelly. After that he through it back in the water nicely and we got the right size of fish and took it back home for tea and fishey yum.

My Amazing Fishing Trip

One weekend me and my dad and my poppa went out to sea up coromandel we went on my
boat we got a Octopus it got the back of the boat all inky we cut the Octopus for bat. Then we were going to have one more fish before going to bed on the boat we got a huge snapper it was so big it snapped the rod so then we had to go home. Then the next weekend we went back and got a baby shark then we got the boat on the trailer and went home.

By Kaleb

Fishing Narratives

The genre we are focusing on for Writing this term is Narrative Writing.
I am encouraging the children to go through the process of planning, writing then editing their work, which they can then publish on this Blog. The work that you will see is the result of this process, and they are responsible for finding any errors in their work.
Enjoy!!

my best fishing trip

IN the holidays my dad and I went fishing in the ocean on a big boat we wated for a bit and then my dads fishing rod went off it was a heavy one massive huge it was hard to real in my dad nealy fell in it fellt like a king fish we only had a small hook but the fish got of the hook easy my dad put on a bigger hook this time my cusins thort it was a small fish. not even what are you talking about.then my dad court the biggest fish hes ever court.he was realling it in it was a litle bit smaller then the other one but it was heavy my dad finnley realed it in.it was the right size.my cusins said thats a big one uncle.bigger noth for the family yip and we went back to the family batch for a feed in maketou.BY JACOB

Speeches

Hi There Viewers
Many students have been busy preparing and rehearsing their speeches.
Today, Lauryn put her hand up to be the first student to present her speech. Her topic was Justin Bieber, and she did an awesome job.
Well done Lauryn.
Watch this space for an update on speeches.

Mr. P.